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Thursday, March 25, 2010

The Poetry Within

The one thing need for life

A brain

The only thing that is hard enough to hold it

A head

How it is studied

Bumps

Where is it recorded

The divine place that keeps everything

How do we know it's there

Everyday studies

Who will make it possible

Everyone and Anyone

What does it make known

Personality and smarts

What makes it realistic

Phrenology

When will it save all of the people in the world

Right now

7 comments:

  1. Nice job! I really like how you kind of asked a question and then answered it in two lines.

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  2. That was really interesting, in a good way. Your voice was really strong and so was your vocabulary. I really like that.

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  3. I agree with Claire. it sounds like one of those motivational commercials or something. It was really good!

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  4. I agree. Your answers to the questions were very bold and powerful. You used your opinion in it, too, which is an excellent element to be able to do. Overall, I think this is a great poem! Nice job Hater C!

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  5. This is very similar to sam's but I like how it got differnt.As Sam kept the pattern going throughout the whole piece, I also liked how you broke it up and just wrote what you thought fit next. sometimes I find that when you try to stick to a pattern, it limits what you want to say.

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  6. The pattern that you use in this poem is really good!! I really like the different style!!!

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  7. That was interesting! Like some of the others said, it was cool how you asked a question and then answered it. The only thing I would suggest is maybe putting in question marks when you ask the questions in this poem. Otherwise, I thought this was great!

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