The one thing need for life
A brain
The only thing that is hard enough to hold it
A head
How it is studied
Bumps
Where is it recorded
The divine place that keeps everything
How do we know it's there
Everyday studies
Who will make it possible
Everyone and Anyone
What does it make known
Personality and smarts
What makes it realistic
Phrenology
When will it save all of the people in the world
Right now
Nice job! I really like how you kind of asked a question and then answered it in two lines.
ReplyDeleteThat was really interesting, in a good way. Your voice was really strong and so was your vocabulary. I really like that.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Claire. it sounds like one of those motivational commercials or something. It was really good!
ReplyDeleteI agree. Your answers to the questions were very bold and powerful. You used your opinion in it, too, which is an excellent element to be able to do. Overall, I think this is a great poem! Nice job Hater C!
ReplyDeleteThis is very similar to sam's but I like how it got differnt.As Sam kept the pattern going throughout the whole piece, I also liked how you broke it up and just wrote what you thought fit next. sometimes I find that when you try to stick to a pattern, it limits what you want to say.
ReplyDeleteThe pattern that you use in this poem is really good!! I really like the different style!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was interesting! Like some of the others said, it was cool how you asked a question and then answered it. The only thing I would suggest is maybe putting in question marks when you ask the questions in this poem. Otherwise, I thought this was great!
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